Waiting for the crash

The smash 

The impact

The wreckage

Waiting for the mortar

To explode

The meteor

To strike

The crocodile

To bite




For flouting every rule I ever made

© Blackheart, May, 2016

One thought on “Waiting…

  1. I so relate to both the Rumi quote and your poem. I have been looking for Mr Right intensively for over 3 months now. I have met someone who I fancied at first as he is very good looking but now he is actually interested in me I have gone off him. He doesn’t have any money which is a problem but he is incredibly intelligent and very nice. I want to ask him to be my sperm donor but my best friend said I should work through my emotional barriers as to why I only like people who are dangerous or unavailable and date him. As for the fear of annihalation in your poem that totally reminds me of when I had OCD and there were so many thousands of rituals I had to do every day in order to prevent annihalation. My life was governed by these OCD rules although the rules were completely crazy!


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